In which I provide @nytimes with some free copy-editing services: http://t.co/Db2ArBVdL9
— Kevin D. Williamson (@KevinNR) September 16, 2015Devastating takedown of actual NY Times story. "Returning to the Copy Desk, Briefly" http://t.co/Ut5V5aR0kv
— Brit Hume (@brithume) September 18, 2015...DATELINE: Ramallah, West Bank, 14 September 2015
COPY: A Jewish man died [ED: “was killed.”] early Monday morning after attackers pelted the road [ED: “pelted the road”? They were aiming at the pavement? Please clarify.] he was driving on with rocks as he was returning home from a dinner celebrating Rosh Hashana, the Jewish New Year, the Israeli authorities said. Prime Minister Benjamin Netanyahu called an emergency meeting to discuss rock-throwing, mostly [ED: “mostly”? Which other rock-throwers were discussed at the emergency meeting?] by Palestinian youths.... (more at the link)
